Sister Joy

December 28, 2011
Though times are hard. They mean so much, our actions short and our voices ring. The old beginnings are coming to an end. Now is the time to start a new beginning....

I live in the sorrow

I dream of a world of darkness and despair

No one knows how I truly feel.

They all ask and question me why I bring terror and hate down onto them

But I don't have the answer.

No one does.

For all I truly know is how to bring sadness and suffering to those who deserve it

I cannot undo what I have done

For my undoing is forever my curse

There is no cure...and I will forever be known as a beast

Sign, Brother Pain

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MercyChristine said...
Feb. 23, 2012 at 11:36 am

I really like this... one suggestion- could you do a new line in the first block between 'our voices ring' and 'the old beginnings' It may just be teenink's new format, but it was a big block of text compared to the rest of your short lines and seemed out of place.  Besides, it seems like there should be a line break there.

I really liked the idea of Sister Joy and Brother Pain (though it should technically say "signed" instead of "sign, Brother Pain"  Maybe you could take th... (more »)

HiddenAngelInTheDark replied...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 4:39 pm
Thank you and thanks for the feedback it means alot :) and yeah my friend and I wanted to do a colided project for TI and good point I'll remeber that next time, glad you enjoyed it 
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