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O Beautiful, you shine so bright
Like stars, a cold distant night
Reveal to me what I could have lost
But instead, I suffered, I stood and fought
So now, I stand on the edge of the world
A weeping woman, a hurried word
A cold blanket of faraway stars
A calming whirlwind of passing cars
Laying in a field of yellow 
Calming voices, soft and mellow
Having you by my side
Makes me whole, makes me alive 
A tender kiss, a caring hand
Hoping for a future immense and grand




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sbetsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 25, 2012 at 7:15 pm:

Very descriptive! Beautiful! Great job!

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

 
sbetsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 25, 2012 at 7:16 pm :
Oh, and I also think you should name it "My Beautiful". Just an idea.
 
so_joyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 1:25 pm :
^that's me
 
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