I Can't Write A Poem

January 5, 2012
By babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown


I can't write a poem,
My hands won't dare touch,
That clean sheet of paper,
Standing in front of my completely blanked out mind,
With its blue and red stripes zooming across,
Around,
And up and down the page,
Causing my fragile head to spin,
Triggering me to fall off my chair,
And shake my head out of disorientation,
Right when I pick my butt back up off the floor,
While I sit back in that stupid chair,
That caused me to fall,
And then I look at that piece of paper that was once empty,
When I realize that it is full of silver scribbles about how,
I can't write a poem



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.king. SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2014 at 1:07 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

LOVELY!!! You are absolutely right! It's a total contrast to my poem "Don't stop writing", but I believe yours is way better. :D Keep it up. ^_^

on Jun. 19 2014 at 10:58 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

This is something, that will make people laugh 9in a good way!) It made me smile. This is really wonderful.

on May. 14 2012 at 6:55 pm
michaela mrianda BRONZE, Temporary, Other
4 articles 0 photos 33 comments
cute poem i find it funny how we tend to do this in real life without even realizing it untill it is over the poem was put together well in has your emotions put in to it to me thats the one thing you need to be able to write well good job.

on Feb. 21 2012 at 3:37 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Thank you :) I did have a little trouble with the wording, thank you for pointing it out!

ChloeE BRONZE said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 5:47 pm
ChloeE BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
WWJD
Proverbs 3:5- Trust in the Lord with all of your heart, and lean not on your own understanding.
"I don't mind not being cool." -Chris Martin

This was really cute! I think one thing I would work on is word choice! Other than that, that was really cute, and fun to read! :)

on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:33 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Thank you! I would have liked some more feedback though :).

on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:31 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Thanks :) me too!

on Feb. 6 2012 at 9:41 am
Longstaffinator BRONZE, Waukesha, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 3 comments
This is good.

on Feb. 5 2012 at 11:33 pm
NeverBroken BRONZE, Chesterfield, Virginia
2 articles 9 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
You have no idea what it's like being me, therefore you have no right to judge me

Ha, i like this one, it made me smile at the end

on Feb. 4 2012 at 6:43 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
39 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Theres so many that I can't pick sorry

No problem :)

on Feb. 4 2012 at 6:42 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Thank you so much Briana! Your comment means a lot, and hopefully I can get published!

on Feb. 4 2012 at 6:42 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Thanks :D!

BrianaK BRONZE said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 6:36 pm
BrianaK BRONZE, Waterford, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Keep Believing"

I think you can write a poem and you are so good, I think you should be published and I thought it was just fantastic!

on Feb. 4 2012 at 6:36 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
39 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Theres so many that I can't pick sorry

Nice work :)

on Feb. 1 2012 at 1:33 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Thank you :)

on Jan. 31 2012 at 6:57 pm
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
27 articles 0 photos 426 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up
~Jhonen Vasquez

Good poem :)

on Jan. 27 2012 at 8:47 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Thank you so much!! :D

on Jan. 27 2012 at 6:29 pm
Ruthie_j BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
3 articles 5 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Church Is Not a Bless Me Club .

Wow ! You're really good :)

on Jan. 27 2012 at 5:31 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Phoenix. said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 4:33 pm
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 93 comments
GREAT POEM!!


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