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I can't write a poem,
My hands won't dare touch,
That clean sheet of paper,
Standing in front of my completely blanked out mind,
With its blue and red stripes zooming across,
Around,
And up and down the page,
Causing my fragile head to spin,
Triggering me to fall off my chair,
And shake my head out of disorientation,
Right when I pick my butt back up off the floor,
While I sit back in that stupid chair,
That caused me to fall,
And then I look at that piece of paper that was once empty,
When I realize that it is full of silver scribbles about how,
I can't write a poem



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AzureBlueThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 1:07 am:
LOVELY!!! You are absolutely right! It's a total contrast to my poem "Don't stop writing", but I believe yours is way better. :D Keep it up. ^_^
 
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moderndayEmilyDickinsonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 19 at 10:58 am:
This is something, that will make people laugh 9in a good way!) It made me smile. This is really wonderful.
 
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Michaela M. said...
May 14, 2012 at 6:55 pm:
cute poem i find it funny how we tend to do this in real life without even realizing it untill it is over the poem was put together well in has your emotions put in to it to me thats the one thing you need to be able to write well good job.
 
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ChloeE said...
Feb. 20, 2012 at 5:47 pm:
This was really cute! I think one thing I would work on is word choice! Other than that, that was really cute, and fun to read! :)
 
babyrex4 replied...
Feb. 21, 2012 at 3:37 pm :
Thank you :) I did have a little trouble with the wording, thank you for pointing it out!
 
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Longstaffinator said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 9:41 am:
This is good.
 
babyrex4 replied...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 2:33 pm :
Thank you! I would have liked some more feedback though :).
 
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NeverBroken said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 11:33 pm:
Ha, i like this one, it made me smile at the end
 
babyrex4 replied...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 2:31 pm :
Thanks :) me too!
 
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BrianaK said...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 6:36 pm:
I think you can write a poem and you are so good, I think you should be published and I thought it was just fantastic!
 
babyrex4 replied...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 6:42 pm :
Thank you so much Briana! Your comment means a lot, and hopefully I can get published!
 
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HiddenAngelInTheDark said...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 6:36 pm:
Nice work :)
 
babyrex4 replied...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 6:42 pm :
Thanks :D!
 
HiddenAngelInTheDark replied...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 6:43 pm :
No problem :)
 
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readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 6:57 pm:
Good poem :)
 
babyrex4 replied...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 1:33 pm :
Thank you :)
 
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Ruthie_j said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 6:29 pm:
Wow ! You're really good :)
 
babyrex4 replied...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 8:47 pm :
Thank you so much!! :D
 
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White_Trash843 said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 4:33 pm:
GREAT POEM!!
 
babyrex4 replied...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 5:31 pm :
Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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