They Are Alone

January 5, 2012
By -Char- GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
-Char- GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
17 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
The true friends are the ones who can get you to laugh even in your darkest depressions. ~Me


You might have noticed some kids who are different.
Some kids who can change.
Their personality is a mystery,
Because some days are normal, some aren’t.
Those poor kids are deep in depression.
Yet they plaster a fake smile across their face.
So one day someone might notice, they are lonely.

You may have noticed, I bet you haven’t.
Truly all they seek is to find a gentle love.
Truly all they seek
Is positive energy to block out their own negative.
Truly all they seek
Is a pat on the head to tell them,
They are cared for.
But who can prove that, while they remain unknown.

You may have noticed these lost souls.
But I can bet you haven’t REALY.
I can bet you'll never know.
I can bet their still lonely.
I can believe their still lost.
I can say their still looking for something.

You might have seen them, you might have noticed.
I will say you haven’t.
For the reason they change so,
Is because they know
In their hearts,
Even to themselves,
They are unknown.
Truly,
WE
Are
Forever
Lost.



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Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2012 at 2:03 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

Wow... I really loved this. Describes how so many people feel and you did a wonderful job of putting it into words!

.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 1:11 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Favorite Quote:
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Wow, beautiful, revealing secret emotions, that was me four years ago !!!

TapTap SILVER said...
on Jan. 18 2012 at 9:51 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

"Truly we are forever lost" CHILLS BIG TIME! l.o.v.e. it 5/5 4 me

on Jan. 18 2012 at 9:49 pm
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
9 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

Thought I could relate but I can't. Well written though.. I don't think I can imagine ever feeling that hopeless.

on Jan. 17 2012 at 1:01 am
Angelgirl39 GOLD, Monument, Colorado
13 articles 5 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"I can sum up all I have learned about life in three words: It goes on\"
~Robert Frost

\"Those who dream by day are often more aware of things then those who dream only by night\"
~Edgar Allan Poe

I love it, spirited, emmotional, and amazing!

-Char- GOLD said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 1:30 am
-Char- GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
17 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
The true friends are the ones who can get you to laugh even in your darkest depressions. ~Me

woohoo! lol. Thanks for reading

Fizza SILVER said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 1:29 am
Fizza SILVER, Raipur, Other
8 articles 2 photos 177 comments
Very very very nice poem. 6/5 stars! :D

cookiestar said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 12:20 am
Wow. This is a great poem:). I almost cired.

on Jan. 10 2012 at 3:16 pm
WhiteWings GOLD, Houston, Texas
14 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing lasts forever on this Earth. Smile

Very spirited. That's dangerous. The poem is GREAT I enjoyed reading it. Make more.


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