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You might have noticed some kids who are different.
Some kids who can change.
Their personality is a mystery,
Because some days are normal, some aren’t.
Those poor kids are deep in depression.
Yet they plaster a fake smile across their face.
So one day someone might notice, they are lonely.

You may have noticed, I bet you haven’t.
Truly all they seek is to find a gentle love.
Truly all they seek
Is positive energy to block out their own negative.
Truly all they seek
Is a pat on the head to tell them,
They are cared for.
But who can prove that, while they remain unknown.

You may have noticed these lost souls.
But I can bet you haven’t REALY.
I can bet you'll never know.
I can bet their still lonely.
I can believe their still lost.
I can say their still looking for something.

You might have seen them, you might have noticed.
I will say you haven’t.
For the reason they change so,
Is because they know
In their hearts,
Even to themselves,
They are unknown.
Truly,
WE
Are
Forever
Lost.





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Shmelmo said...
Jan. 23, 2012 at 2:03 pm
Wow... I really loved this. Describes how so many people feel and you did a wonderful job of putting it into words!
 
Silver2black said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 1:11 am
Wow, beautiful, revealing secret emotions, that was me four years ago !!!
 
thefamoustapper said...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 9:51 pm
"Truly we are forever lost" CHILLS BIG TIME! l.o.v.e. it 5/5 4 me
 
recurring_resilience said...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 9:49 pm
Thought I could relate but I can't. Well written though.. I don't think I can imagine ever feeling that hopeless.
 
Angelgirl39 said...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 1:01 am
I love it, spirited, emmotional, and amazing!
 
Fizzy_GirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 1:29 am
Very very very nice poem. 6/5 stars! :D
 
Charlotte_Ryu replied...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 1:30 am
woohoo! lol. Thanks for reading
 
cookiestar said...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 12:20 am
Wow. This is a great poem:). I almost cired.
 
WhiteWings said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 3:16 pm
Very spirited. That's dangerous. The poem is GREAT I enjoyed reading it. Make more.
 
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