Life's Melody

By browneyez16, Hephzibah, GA

Short and Simple
Soft and Sweet
Listen to life's melody

The harmony
Our part to play
A new note added everyday

The more and more
We get along
The more you can hear life's sweet song

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Spiritless said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 10:50 pm:

Love it! Simple. Short. And Sweet.

browneyez16 replied...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 4:00 pm :

Thanks so much!!!

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Fabala_G said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 10:01 pm:

I play piano :) this was awesome. Such a big message in such a simple poem! It's great!

browneyez16 replied...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 7:04 pm :

really? I've always wanted to learn. I hoped I was getting my point across well enough...thanks fab!!!

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kaleighmay said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 4:52 pm:

omg, i play the violin and i totally understand this poem!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!

browneyez16 replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 4:59 pm :

Really? i play the flute!

kaleighmay replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 5:04 pm :

Yea, music is really my life. Music has always been in my life since I started dancing when I was 4 years old. And then I chose to play the violin in 5th grade and I've played since then. And being in my schools color guard and winter guard adds more love to my love of the arts and music.

browneyez16 replied...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 9:46 pm :

Music is mine too. I danced from the time I was 2 until I was 9. I wish I still could....I also started playing the flute in 5th grade. Music is my everything. Color gaurd?? I've heard of it but what is it exactly?

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meals100 said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 4:08 pm:

LOVE this!

browneyez16 replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 4:23 pm :

Thanks!! I appreciate it.

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GreenEyes said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 8:54 pm:

Amazing..Dearie, I love you. [: Put more of your poems up, they're ALL amazing.

browneyez16 replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 8:01 am :

Thanks GreenEyes!!! (lol) I will keep putting them up. I hope you keep reading them and giving me your opinion.