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Living

December 13, 2011
By Anonymous

The dread of not existing
Has haunted my conscience too long.
It is time for me to accept
That I am nothing more or less
Than an accident of nature.

The awe I feel
That life could occurre at all
Overpowers my senses.
Intricate, yet flawed,
In a way allowing more beauty.

How lucky am I
To linger in this beautiful world
When infinite possible lives
Never will?
How ungrateful would it be
To complain of life's brevity?

I am done with fear.
Wonder is enough.
Love is enough.
Life is enough.
So I've opened my eyes...
It's time to start living.



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on Jan. 8 2012 at 9:57 am
Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Try to learn to breathe deeply,
really to taste food when you eat,
and when you sleep, really to sleep.
Try as much as possible to be
wholly alive, with all your might,
and when you laugh, laugh like hell,
and when you get angry, get good
and angry. Try to be alive. You will
be dead soon enough."
William Saroyan

Thanks Jappy! Ps great user name :)

on Jan. 8 2012 at 9:55 am
Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Try to learn to breathe deeply,
really to taste food when you eat,
and when you sleep, really to sleep.
Try as much as possible to be
wholly alive, with all your might,
and when you laugh, laugh like hell,
and when you get angry, get good
and angry. Try to be alive. You will
be dead soon enough."
William Saroyan

Thank you! You guys are awesome :)

on Jan. 8 2012 at 9:55 am
Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Try to learn to breathe deeply,
really to taste food when you eat,
and when you sleep, really to sleep.
Try as much as possible to be
wholly alive, with all your might,
and when you laugh, laugh like hell,
and when you get angry, get good
and angry. Try to be alive. You will
be dead soon enough."
William Saroyan

Thank you :)

on Jan. 8 2012 at 9:53 am
Prometheus PLATINUM, East Aurora, New York
29 articles 0 photos 106 comments
The penultimate stanza is my favorite. Your perspective is encouraging. Great job on your first work.

Jaclynmarie said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 9:49 am
this is a great poem, really emotional and true. keep writing!

butterfly123 said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 9:31 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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hey! amazing poem! i have no words for it. keep up the good work!

on Jan. 8 2012 at 9:09 am
Jappyalldayeveryday, Detroit, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
They say that good things take time, but really great things happen in the blink of an eye

I really like this though parts of it are kind of depressing

Manish9 SILVER said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 2:03 am
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
6 articles 12 photos 110 comments
Great work and written in a good mood . Keep it up and see if you can comment on mine !

on Jan. 7 2012 at 6:32 pm
SeizeTheDay SILVER, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem (Seize the day).

Wow! Really eye-opening! So beautiful! Keep up the awesome work! (:

on Jan. 7 2012 at 6:21 pm
Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Try to learn to breathe deeply,
really to taste food when you eat,
and when you sleep, really to sleep.
Try as much as possible to be
wholly alive, with all your might,
and when you laugh, laugh like hell,
and when you get angry, get good
and angry. Try to be alive. You will
be dead soon enough."
William Saroyan

Thanks very much :)

MorganJ SILVER said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 5:46 pm
MorganJ SILVER, Hager City, Wisconsin
9 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Look up in the sky and remember the good times we had -Ariana Helmick

THis is really good :)

on Jan. 7 2012 at 5:20 pm
InvisibleHeart GOLD, Barony, Other
15 articles 4 photos 36 comments
I really like the flow of this poem. The meaning and emotion is good as well. Very well done :)

on Jan. 7 2012 at 5:12 pm
Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Try to learn to breathe deeply,
really to taste food when you eat,
and when you sleep, really to sleep.
Try as much as possible to be
wholly alive, with all your might,
and when you laugh, laugh like hell,
and when you get angry, get good
and angry. Try to be alive. You will
be dead soon enough."
William Saroyan

Thanks Jane!

on Jan. 7 2012 at 4:59 pm
Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Try to learn to breathe deeply,
really to taste food when you eat,
and when you sleep, really to sleep.
Try as much as possible to be
wholly alive, with all your might,
and when you laugh, laugh like hell,
and when you get angry, get good
and angry. Try to be alive. You will
be dead soon enough."
William Saroyan

Thanks Lucy!

on Jan. 7 2012 at 4:55 pm
lucybrown SILVER, Blacksburg, Virginia
7 articles 0 photos 112 comments

Favorite Quote:
The wastebasket is a writer's best friend. ~Isaac Bashevis Singer

First things first, but not necessarily in that order. ~ From Doctor Who

This is a wonderful poem! It has a great rhythm to it and I loved how the last stanza brought it all together. Great work!

on Jan. 7 2012 at 4:52 pm
Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Try to learn to breathe deeply,
really to taste food when you eat,
and when you sleep, really to sleep.
Try as much as possible to be
wholly alive, with all your might,
and when you laugh, laugh like hell,
and when you get angry, get good
and angry. Try to be alive. You will
be dead soon enough."
William Saroyan

Thanks for taking the time to comment :)

on Jan. 7 2012 at 4:49 pm
Vanilla4Life BRONZE, Carrollton, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about it."
"Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect. It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfections."

I like this! It has a lot of meaning and I find it true. People shouldn't complain about their lives when many others can't survive in this world.

on Jan. 7 2012 at 2:36 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

This poem has a good message, i like it

on Jan. 7 2012 at 1:21 pm
lezziefarie GOLD, Palestine, Texas
13 articles 2 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
sometimes you get away with a mistake and other times life forces you to watch the one you love, love some one else......

no problem continue writing :p

on Jan. 7 2012 at 12:59 pm
Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Try to learn to breathe deeply,
really to taste food when you eat,
and when you sleep, really to sleep.
Try as much as possible to be
wholly alive, with all your might,
and when you laugh, laugh like hell,
and when you get angry, get good
and angry. Try to be alive. You will
be dead soon enough."
William Saroyan

Thanks for commenting :)