Broken Memories

January 6, 2012
My heart is shattered.
All i'm left with is memories.
Memories of what used to be my life.
You used to be my life.
I look back hoping someday it will change.
That your mind will change.
That you will realize you do still love me.
And I will become your world again.
Like I once was not too long ago.
I miss you more than anything.
The memories still linger.
Still haunt my dreams.
They make me wonder.
Wonder what this is doing to you.
If you still think about me.
Still think about what we were.
What has been and what should be.
It should be me and you against the world.
Like it always was.
But now they are just memories.
The broken memories of our broken love.
Left to die away in the sea of broken dreams.

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ReneeB said...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 12:43 am
I love this! It's sad and heartrboken, yes, but I like the longing and emotionyou were able to put into it.

the only thing i may be able to reccomend is changing the punctuation from being all periods to maybe some commas or semi-colons or nothing at all; all those periods seem to make it halting. but if that's the point of it, it's fine. I like it! :)
LaurenL. replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 12:59 am
yay! thank youu! & yeah, I was thinking that with the punctuation as well. (:
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