A Sort of Fairy Tale Poem?

November 12, 2011
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Somewhere, anywhere, in the dead
of night.
It could be blue dust that pixies threw into space.
The magnificent sunlight that reflects specs of rays.

Anything, anywhere that could possibly have a chance to maybe...
save your life?
You might just wander alone
when you travel to see nothing.
Discovering that all is lost.
All is lost...?


Don't ever give up.
The future of THAT is in your hands.
So just...

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cookiestar said...
Jan. 12, 2012 at 12:27 am
This is a great poem:). Good job!
Char_Ryu said...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 8:36 pm
It's very symbolic, that's why you probably don't get it. But alot of my faverite poems are kind of like this and b famous people. XD
MiraStorm This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 8:34 pm
Kind of confusing... not sure what exactly you are talking about. but i do like the last several lines alot!
Zinaidia said...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 5:21 pm
Wow, very empowering, great job! Just make sure your line spacing is right. Little things that make it easier to read you know? Otherwise great, you have a very unique voice. I dont read many poems like this one. Bravo!
Char_Ryu replied...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 5:23 pm
Those lat 3 words at the end annoy me because there off to the side :( Sorry bout that. It's automatic,
famousthetapper said...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 3:44 pm
This so reflects all the choices you have in your life. I love the word SOAR...anyways beautiful poem, 5/5 stars
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