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We swore we'd be together forever
We made a promise to never part
But I guess it's karma for saying 'never'
You've removed my space in your heart.
I'll try to erase our memories
I'll burn everything that reminds me of you.
I'll lock them away with multiple keys
But that isn't all that I will do.
I'll scream at your pictures
And claw out your face
You won't be my fixture
I'll block your number, just in case.
But the reality is:
It might take years.
The truth of the matter is:
I've cried way too many tears.
So I'm saying good-bye
I'm letting you know
I now see you as the bad guy
In our real life theatrical show.




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recurring_resilience said...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 11:22 pm:
Nice poem. Brings back memories of what I went through last year.. I like things I can relate to.
 
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praveenbryonadamrocks said...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 11:40 am:
Nice.....I love ur work...keep writing
 
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JaneCapelleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 4:21 pm:
This was very good, the rhyming gives it nice flow and keeps the reader interested...me and you write in like the same way XD very good poem, 5 outta 5 =)
 
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satellite23This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 3:44 pm:
Very nice and quick, nice rhythm, but a little too cliche and..."pop" for me. But overall pretty decent.
 
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SecretFlameThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 11:05 pm:
This is great! I love the flow and rhythm. It was well done and very emotional.
 
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