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When you are with the world, like it with passion,
For, your sight is wide open!
There’s nothing to feel odd about opening your heart,
For, a pure heart enjoys it that way!
Try to enjoy which is good, but you dislike,
For, then you will feel a change!
Don’t be back with what you ought to know,
For, something will be disturbing if you are!
Make fear reduce from you,
For it is what stops you from trying!
Trying hard will bring success,
For, experiences are what it has got!
Always be a faithful and a good man,
For, that is the best a soul can be!
Best of a soul is how positive he is, with himself,
And how grateful he is to the world!



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RCB31 said...
May 6, 2012 at 2:24 am:
Very Nice...Keep it uP...
 
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White_Trash843 said...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 8:56 pm:
love it!!!!!
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 10:01 am :
Thanks, dude! :)
 
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chloe_garrett said...
Jan. 23, 2012 at 8:50 am:
This is beautiful. Awww. You write like an adult from medeival times. It's very distinctive in a great way. I'd be honored if you checked out my other stuff. :D
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 10:31 am :
Gracious. Yah I will, so will u? And feel free to leave a comment!
 
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cookiestar said...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 3:41 am:
Wow. I love this poem:). It's beautiful written. Good job!
 
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tonite said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 5:13 am:
this is beautiful!!!!!!!
 
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Fairy_Me said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 1:54 am:
Wow!! I love this poem!! It makes me read again and again...
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 3:35 am :
very well, thank u!
 
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POET_MAN16 said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 4:50 am:
this poem was beautiful keep it up man
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 12:29 pm :
thanx man.. i really felt right it this way!
 
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IzzyVT said...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 2:57 pm:
I love your use of exclamation points...what a joyful poem! And the art you've chosen is a nice fit.
 
Muzee3 replied...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 12:31 pm :
I'll give a bow to your comment.. :) Thank you!
 
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