In The Presence Of Insanity

January 1, 2012
By Loanna SILVER, Champaign, Illinois
Loanna SILVER, Champaign, Illinois
7 articles 1 photo 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Taking joy in living is a woman's best cosmetic. ~Rosalind Russell


Everything is rushing,
Racing past my eyes.
Onto my mind it's falling,
Drowning me in life.
Ideas, hopes, thoughts and fears,
Caressing touches of unconscious tears.
Every color, every dream, standing bright
In the presence of insanity.



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Loanna SILVER said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 5:31 am
Loanna SILVER, Champaign, Illinois
7 articles 1 photo 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Taking joy in living is a woman's best cosmetic. ~Rosalind Russell

Thanks. I had fun writing this even though it didn't take that long.

IzzyVT SILVER said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 3:05 pm
IzzyVT SILVER, N. Ferrisburg, Vermont
6 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If the person you are talking to doesn't appear to be listening, be patient. It may simply be that he has a small piece of fluff in his ear.”
― A.A. Milne, Winnie-the-Pooh

Wow, I love this. It's so quick and concise, while being deep and indirect at the same time...if that makes any sense... The immense intense emotion you've fit into so few lines is wonderful, and the image you chose reflects "In the Presence of Insanity" perfectly. I really hope this gets published.


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