shadows

December 31, 2011
By yazigirl BRONZE, Athens, Texas
yazigirl BRONZE, Athens, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"people say hell is endless. i say hell is empty and all the demons are here"- one tree hill


Stuck in the dark shadows, not being able to escape. I hug myself tightly trying to keep all the darkness away. It seems to not be working for I can still feel it, slithering into my soul, taking control. I open my mouth to scream, but my voice is being choked. I feel lost here in the deep mist, were I can’t see past myself. Taken over by a new wave of fear I try my best to hold on. It seems useless now as the darkness that was slowly creeping takes over my whole body my sole, and now I let myself fall in it not caring….


The author's comments:
sometimes, life feels like this.

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on Jan. 4 2012 at 10:46 pm
yazigirl BRONZE, Athens, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"people say hell is endless. i say hell is empty and all the demons are here"- one tree hill

thank you! ill do the line thing next time!

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on Jan. 4 2012 at 10:40 pm
LeEmmers, Grindrod, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt. ~Sylvia Plath

This is good. No joke! Your flow seems to run smoothly, and the way your words seemed to go together so well was great! I wasn't a huge fan as to how it was set up though.... maybe make lines instead of just one paragraph? I think it would look more professional and purely make it easier to read. Nice job though! Keep writing!

on Jan. 3 2012 at 11:01 pm
yazigirl BRONZE, Athens, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"people say hell is endless. i say hell is empty and all the demons are here"- one tree hill

thank you!!!

on Jan. 3 2012 at 10:52 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

Aw, I can imagine and feel your words.. thats a compliment, that means ur good at connecting ur feelings with the reader and writing. -hugs- Good work :) Keep holding on

on Jan. 3 2012 at 9:12 pm
yazigirl BRONZE, Athens, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"people say hell is endless. i say hell is empty and all the demons are here"- one tree hill

thank you very much! i really appreciate it!

on Jan. 3 2012 at 9:05 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

I love it becuase reading this i can envision the wrtier (or character) vividly curled up and eyes dashing from corner to croner...i also like it because you know you write from life inspiration! awesome keep it up!

on Jan. 3 2012 at 8:57 pm
yazigirl BRONZE, Athens, Texas
1 article 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"people say hell is endless. i say hell is empty and all the demons are here"- one tree hill

thank you wolf!

on Jan. 3 2012 at 8:56 pm
CaptainStar BRONZE, Estancia, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Your limit is what you make it.

This spreads the feeling of dread and fear. You did an excelent job of describing it and your writing is fantasic. I look forward to reading more of your work.


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