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one more day without you.

December 31, 2011
By LyssaPoo SILVER, Manteno, Illinois
LyssaPoo SILVER, Manteno, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love doesnt die because of distance, love dies because of doubts."


it seems the days are getting a little colder.
and the memories of you and i are getting older.
but day by day, i think a little more.
and realize that the half of my heart i still do have, is still sore.
i didn't deserve what you put me through.
my feeling were completely true.
i gave you everything and got nothing in return.
the pictures i try to burn.
but something holds me back, memories? nightmares? love. i don't really know.
but the feelings are getting easier to not show.
i can actually smile a little more knowing you're getting what you gave me.
and a nothing you'll always be.
i don't care if you talk about me, i don't care if you lie.
but i will no longer believe your heart warming sigh.
now, i hide my heart somewhere where no one would ever find it.
and there it will forever sit.
thinking about a day where my other half comes along.
and sings my happily ever after song


The author's comments:
just writing <3

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on Jan. 10 2012 at 11:26 am
LyssaPoo SILVER, Manteno, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love doesnt die because of distance, love dies because of doubts."

thanks!!!! i have more coming in submission right now :D

on Jan. 9 2012 at 3:23 pm
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself"
" Love and Loyalty Runs Deeper Than Blood!"
"A wise girl kisses, but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, leaves b4 shes left."

I agree with all of them, this is really good. keep me posted if you don't mind thx.

on Jan. 7 2012 at 12:35 pm
Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
1 article 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Try to learn to breathe deeply,
really to taste food when you eat,
and when you sleep, really to sleep.
Try as much as possible to be
wholly alive, with all your might,
and when you laugh, laugh like hell,
and when you get angry, get good
and angry. Try to be alive. You will
be dead soon enough."
William Saroyan

I liked this idea a lot! Well done! I hate to do this on a comment but my first poem just got accepted on here, and I'd really appreciate if you guys rated/commented. I want some feedback! Thanks!

Phoenix. said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 12:08 am
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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i really like this good job!

emilykl BRONZE said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 8:53 pm
emilykl BRONZE, Eastvale, California
4 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every tear says a thousand words but its up to the bearer what language they speak

I can totally relate!

on Jan. 6 2012 at 8:36 pm
live.love.learn. SILVER, El Cajon, California
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
The supreme prayer of my heart is not to be learned, rich, famous, powerful, or good, but simply to be radiant. I desire to radiate health, cheerfulness, calm courage, and good will. I wish to live without hate, whim, jealousy, envy, fear. I wish to be simple, honest, frank, natural, clean in mind and clean in body, unaffected - as ready to say I do not know, if it be so, and to meet all men on an absolute equality - to face any obstacle and meet every difficulty unabashed and unafraid.
I wish others to live their lives, too - up to their highest, fullest, and best. To that end I pray that I may never meddle, interfere, dictate, give advice that is not wanted, or assist when my services are not needed. If I can help people, I'll do it by giving them a chance to help themselves; and if I can uplift or inspire, let it be by example, inference, and suggestion, rather than by injunction and dictation. That is to say, I desire to be radiant - to radiate life.
-Elbert Hubbard

i really really like this.. it has that independent stand to it.. yet ur tellin ur old love u dnt need them its wonderful keep going! :)

on Jan. 6 2012 at 8:34 pm
holyblondecheerleaderbatman BRONZE, Wasilla, Alaska
1 article 2 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Who said I want to fit in ?

OMG THIS IS REALLY GOOD PLEASE RIGHT MORE POEMS