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Tripping Me

I see you
staring
glaring
blaring your thoughts
at me
as you push me
put me
knock me down
and around
yet I
never make
a sound'or action
in defense
because I sense
you just want
to fit in
with the crowd





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Honor said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 2:09 pm
It was good, except that the format of it was hard to read.
 
ThePersonWithThePandaHat replied...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 2:20 pm
If you have any improvement suggestions
 
ThePersonWithThePandaHat replied...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 2:21 pm
I'm open to it :)
 
Honor replied...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 2:24 pm
Well yeah, like it's hard to read when it's like how you did it...maybe more like so: I see you, staring, glaring blaring you thought at me Ect. Ect.
 
Honor replied...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 2:25 pm
Gah it messed up....lemme try again I see you string, glaring blaring you thoughts at me Etc. etc.
 
Honor replied...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 2:27 pm
IT WON"T WORK!!! GAH! Okay so I mean it would be easier to read if "I see you staring. glaring" were on one line then "Blaring your thoughts at me" would be one the line below that...you get what I saying...sorry typing.
 
ThePersonWithThePandaHat replied...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 2:53 pm
I ment it the way i typed, it kind of enfasized my point..but i think only i understood that.sorry.
 
Goku-The-Mighty replied...
Apr. 10, 2012 at 2:24 pm
the poem is great. honors right though. other than that, it was great.
 
Too.Dead.To.Die replied...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 2:16 pm
Thank you!!!
 
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