Tripping Me

December 13, 2011
By A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
If zombies attack us..im tripping u
If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.
If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn't come back it was never yours.
I'm scared to fall and be dropped.


I see you
staring
glaring
blaring your thoughts
at me
as you push me
put me
knock me down
and around
yet I
never make
a sound'or action
in defense
because I sense
you just want
to fit in
with the crowd


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on Apr. 17 2012 at 2:16 pm
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
If zombies attack us..im tripping u
If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.
If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn't come back it was never yours.
I'm scared to fall and be dropped.

Thank you!!!

on Apr. 10 2012 at 2:24 pm
Depressed-Ness SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
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You can wish apon a star, but only you can make the dream come true.

You dont need boys, boys need you.

the poem is great. honors right though. other than that, it was great.

on Jan. 26 2012 at 2:53 pm
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
If zombies attack us..im tripping u
If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.
If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn't come back it was never yours.
I'm scared to fall and be dropped.

I ment it the way i typed, it kind of enfasized my point..but i think only i understood that.sorry.

Honour SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 2:27 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

IT WON"T WORK!!! GAH! Okay so I mean it would be easier to read if "I see you staring. glaring" were on one line then "Blaring your thoughts at me" would be one the line below that...you get what I saying...sorry typing.

Honour SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 2:25 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

Gah it messed up....lemme try again I see you string, glaring blaring you thoughts at me Etc. etc.

Honour SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 2:24 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
9 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

Well yeah, like it's hard to read when it's like how you did it...maybe more like so: I see you, staring, glaring blaring you thought at me Ect. Ect.

on Jan. 16 2012 at 2:21 pm
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
If zombies attack us..im tripping u
If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.
If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn't come back it was never yours.
I'm scared to fall and be dropped.

I'm open to it :)

on Jan. 16 2012 at 2:20 pm
A.Raven.Is.Like.A.Writing.Desk PLATINUM, Caledonia, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
If zombies attack us..im tripping u
If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will go through life thinking its stupid.
If you love somthing then let it go, if it doesn't come back it was never yours.
I'm scared to fall and be dropped.

If you have any improvement suggestions

Honour SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 2:09 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
9 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

It was good, except that the format of it was hard to read.




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