My Kryptonite

December 13, 2011
I always
have words
for everything
you make me
i'm always
but you make me
i'm always
calm and collected
but you make me freak out
tongue tied
i've got goose bumpes
but i'm alright
even though
my kryptonite

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SweetPolarBearHugs said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 1:46 pm
This was fantastic but you need to change the "i"s into "I"s. And when you start with a new line in a poem you have to make the lower cases into bigger cases. (Not sure if that's what they call the baby letters and big letters lol) It was really a fantastic poem all in all :).
ThePersonWithThePandaHat replied...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 1:52 pm
I'm sorry for my gramatical errors, and did the every line uncapitalized because I didn't think that it was suppose to be capitalized..
SweetPolarBearHugs replied...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 1:56 pm
No it's okay I have to admit I do the samething sometimes but only in my notebook or when I'm really in a rush.
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