A Girl's Weakness'

December 13, 2011
Kiss a girl
hold her hand
keep her close
ask her to dance
rap her in
your arms so tight
talk to her
all day and night
compliment her
on her worst days
and lover her in
every
way





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173_XD said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 1:55 pm
Awww this one is sooo cute X3
 
SweetPolarBearHugs said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 1:36 pm
I like this but you had miss spelled two words (Do you type super fast? Because I do the samething too!) "Rap" should have been "Wrap" and "lover" should have been "love". All in all it was a lovely poem :D.
 
ThePersonWithThePandaHat replied...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 1:39 pm
yeah i typed it too fast, it was PERFECT when i wrote it in my notebook..
 
SweetPolarBearHugs replied...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 1:51 pm
You write in a notebook too?! So do I!! It's so annoying when you have to look back and forth from your notebook to your computer. And don't get me started on when you lose your place and you just want to throw your book and your computer out the window lol!! And the headaches too! So annoying DX.
 
ThePersonWithThePandaHat replied...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 2:02 pm
Oh my gosh IKR!!!!!
 
recurring_resilience said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 1:34 pm
Well done! I like how you structure it! It reminds me of my style!
 
ThePersonWithThePandaHat replied...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 1:36 pm
thank you!!!
 
TheGracefulWriter replied...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 3:03 pm
It's SO beautiful!! Good work! :)
 
ThePersonWithThePandaHat replied...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 2:53 pm
Thank you!! I really try :)
 
Goku-The-Mighty replied...
Apr. 10, 2012 at 2:27 pm
keep up the good work. i will try to write good poems like you.
 
Too.Dead.To.Die replied...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 2:22 pm
I will   :) and I'm not THAT good, so I bet anybody could write just as good, if not better, so all you gotta do is try!
 
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