Without You

December 28, 2011
By ArielleArmageddon PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
ArielleArmageddon PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
45 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
if i cant hear your heartbeat, you're too far away


the skys aren't as blue
when I'm without you.
a roses sent isn't as sweet
when you are away.
a cherry is tart
when you are gone.
neon colours are dull and grey
because you are the one that makes them bright.
my smiles are fake
unless they smile at you.
i do not dream
unless the dreams are of you.
all joy will leave if you leave too
i love you.



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on Jan. 20 2012 at 10:08 am
iamawesomeK SILVER, Wilmington, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
I am sure I won't be able to fit that many quotes in here.

it was well written and i especially liked the picture u picked with it

on Jan. 18 2012 at 11:58 am
ArielleArmageddon PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
45 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
if i cant hear your heartbeat, you're too far away

thank you. how so?

on Jan. 17 2012 at 12:50 pm
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

Poem was good, though the last line seemed a bit out of place to me..


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