Done. Over. Goodbye. (D.O.G)

December 29, 2011
I'm done fighting back all these tears.
Im tired of people walking all over me.
I dont want to be seen easy.
Im harder then that.
I cant say no.
I let people do what they want to me.
But im supposed to be okay with that.
Im not supposed to care.
I cant think positively without being called Conceited.
I cant take critisim
I let people say a simple sorry,
and everythings supposed to be okay.
I dont exactly know what to do about it.
Ill find something.
I dont know who I am anymore.
I never knew who I was.
I never will know who I am.
Nothing makes sense anymore.
I feel like people are talking to me, and no sound is coming out.
I try being nice,
because thats how I want people to treat me.
I believe everyone deserves a chance at friendship.
I dont care who it is,
Everyone, deserves a chance.





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peanutbutter2998 said...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 3:13 pm
thankyou guys! I wrote this awhile back, I was losing alot of my friends for reasons I didnt know.. and i thought i would put it up because I thought teens would feel just like I did.. so thankyou guys so much I appreciate your comments!:)
 
clumsyteardropper said...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 12:50 pm
That was very well said. I'm sorry that you are feeling this way. I hope that things get better for you.
 
JamesODalaigh This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 2:15 pm
What you're saying is very poignant and it inspires a mutual sentiment in the reader. I don't know whether you meant to make so many mistakes regarding syntax, but now that I've read it again it kind of adds a shrill pace to it, which I liked.
 
BeccaKoko said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 1:58 pm
I wish I had written this! It's so good, and you've got me right on the spot.
 
IzzyVT said...
Jan. 1, 2012 at 12:58 pm
Fairly often the picture the author chose doesn't match their poem. Yours, however, matches very nicely.
 
beachgal123 said...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 2:02 pm
This is sooo good and I'm so sorry you feel that way but this is a great way to get your feelings out. You're not alone
 
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