Done. Over. Goodbye. (D.O.G)

December 29, 2011
By peanutbutter2998 ELITE, Greenville, New York
peanutbutter2998 ELITE, Greenville, New York
102 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You are your own person. Nobody can change that. If they do change you, You are no longer yourself. They cannot make you better or smarter or better looking. They can only make you worse."-Natalie (myself)


I'm done fighting back all these tears.
Im tired of people walking all over me.
I dont want to be seen easy.
Im harder then that.
I cant say no.
I let people do what they want to me.
But im supposed to be okay with that.
Im not supposed to care.
I cant think positively without being called Conceited.
I cant take critisim
I let people say a simple sorry,
and everythings supposed to be okay.
I dont exactly know what to do about it.
Ill find something.
I dont know who I am anymore.
I never knew who I was.
I never will know who I am.
Nothing makes sense anymore.
I feel like people are talking to me, and no sound is coming out.
I try being nice,
because thats how I want people to treat me.
I believe everyone deserves a chance at friendship.
I dont care who it is,
Everyone, deserves a chance.



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on Jan. 4 2012 at 3:13 pm
peanutbutter2998 ELITE, Greenville, New York
102 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You are your own person. Nobody can change that. If they do change you, You are no longer yourself. They cannot make you better or smarter or better looking. They can only make you worse."-Natalie (myself)

thankyou guys! I wrote this awhile back, I was losing alot of my friends for reasons I didnt know.. and i thought i would put it up because I thought teens would feel just like I did.. so thankyou guys so much I appreciate your comments!:)

on Jan. 3 2012 at 12:50 pm
clumsyteardropper SILVER, Roslyn, Pennsylvania
8 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can't help others, if you yourself need help" -my sister ;) love it!

That was very well said. I'm sorry that you are feeling this way. I hope that things get better for you.

on Jan. 2 2012 at 2:15 pm
JamesODalaigh BRONZE, Bandon, Other
4 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Ever tried. Ever failed. No matter. Try Again. Fail again. Fail better -Samuel Beckett.
Don't be seduced into thinking that that which does not make a profit is without value -Arthur Miller.

What you're saying is very poignant and it inspires a mutual sentiment in the reader. I don't know whether you meant to make so many mistakes regarding syntax, but now that I've read it again it kind of adds a shrill pace to it, which I liked.

on Jan. 2 2012 at 1:58 pm
BeccaKoko SILVER, Mason, Michigan
7 articles 1 photo 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Jesus thinks I'm to die for<3

I wish I had written this! It's so good, and you've got me right on the spot.

IzzyVT SILVER said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 12:58 pm
IzzyVT SILVER, N. Ferrisburg, Vermont
6 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If the person you are talking to doesn't appear to be listening, be patient. It may simply be that he has a small piece of fluff in his ear.”
― A.A. Milne, Winnie-the-Pooh

Fairly often the picture the author chose doesn't match their poem. Yours, however, matches very nicely.

on Dec. 31 2011 at 2:02 pm
ashlyn939 PLATINUM, Lynchburg, Virginia
34 articles 14 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love means holding on to someone just as hard as you can because if you don't, one blink and they might disappear... forever." -Ellen Hopkins, Impulse

This is sooo good and I'm so sorry you feel that way but this is a great way to get your feelings out. You're not alone


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