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December 27, 2011
As I sit here, against the wall,

I feel the cool stone on my back,

I feel your fingertips on my skin, again.

I close my eyes

The memory traces an outline in the sky

But do you remember?

Can you feel the wind blow through you?

Or the water glide across your body?

Your hand in mine, my head on your shoulder.

Me and you, just us two,

we were here.

Our place.

As the sun dims, I find myself writing this in silence

For now, its just a memory that lingers still.





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Love_In_Her_Eyes said...
Feb. 29, 2012 at 10:41 pm
Drish you really have a wonderful talent. Please continue to write :) Very well done.
 
drishm replied...
Mar. 1, 2012 at 10:20 am
Thank you!!! :D
 
VAga:) said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 8:32 am
It's a beauty
 
drishm replied...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 9:29 pm
aga!!! ily soooo much!!!! :D thanks :D
 
Vrtkasn said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 2:12 am
Great job drish! :D
 
drishm replied...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 4:45 am
thanks!!! ily
 
MiraStorm This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 12:06 pm
thats a sad poem. i can feel the emotion in it. good job!
 
josika said...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 9:09 am
hey ! beautiful piece! it is very good for the first poem. keep it up!
 
Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 6:31 pm
Dearie , you've got tons of potential in the art of poetry writing. I think there are some things you need to learn first , but this was a sweet and nostalgic poem that brings emotion to the reader. Good job. I look forward to more from you. *****
 
drishm replied...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 11:11 pm
thanks a ton!!! I'm writing more, and I've submitted quite a few articles, just hoping they'd get selected
 
drishm said...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 1:31 am
thank you so much guys!!! it's my first poem on TI, so this means a lot to me. hopefully, i'll post some more, and hope that you'll check that out too. :)
 
I-Luv-To-Hate-Luv-Storys This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 12:47 am
Nice work. Very beautifully written. I agree with Whitewings. Keep writing more. ;) Would u mind to check out some of my work??
 
WhiteWings said...
Dec. 28, 2011 at 11:50 pm
I love it. You capture the past inside the present in a way that I myself can not. This is amazing and I wish to learn to do that.
 
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