I Still Miss You

I still miss you
When I
Wake up in the morning
And know I will not see your cheerful smile

I still miss you
When I
Sit down at school
And you are not
By my side

I still miss you
When I
Fall to the ground
And you aren’t there to
Comfort me

I still miss you
When I
Know you’re talking to new friends
And I’m still only holding on to You

I still miss you
Every single day





Join the Discussion

This article has 3 comments. Post your own now!

MissExploration said...
Aug. 1, 2013 at 7:33 pm
Sweet poem. I like how every stanza starts out with, "I still miss you/When I..." I can tell that the narrator is talking about someone they love and hoping to see them soon.
 
Labradorian This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 2, 2013 at 2:26 pm
Ack. This is sooo embarrasing to read now (it's been about 2 years since I wrote it, and my writing style has changed tremendously since then.) but I'm glad you found something to like in it at least. 
 
MissExploration replied...
Aug. 3, 2013 at 2:27 am
I tend to like reading older poems people have written. Whenever I look over my older ones, I start thinking why did I ever write that? But its good to have older poems as a reference to see how much you have changed and accomplished. :)
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback