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Spring was slumbering for long,
The birds had discord in their song,
The moon, not where it did belong
And the world was black

The trees did not waltz with the wind
The little earth was freshly skinned
None were mellow than the sinned
By my window’s crack –

There gently blew a steady breeze
In their graves, did the withering freeze
The moon so silently did tease
Of that era, back

Back when she heard a whisper pierce,
Marring still the nightly cheers;
While collared men sniffed at their beers
What the world did lack –

The world did lack a watchful gaze,
A police to his lifelong craze
Which willed him to a thorny maze
And do the Black

Tonight, my feather and my ink
Long for just a distant wink
To make me walk far from the brink
Let me not in this abyss sink:

Where the birds sing daz’ed, out of tune
Where lyrics is but just a rune
“The end of days has come too soon,”
Says the aged, frosty moon

Gone is his fair voice from dawn,
Music is but just a fawn –
With no swan song, he was gone
I still can hear his music… John



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Jessie-The-Nerd said...
Aug. 9, 2012 at 3:28 am:
WOW. Nothin more said. Wish I could write like that
 
Wildflower30This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 30, 2012 at 2:24 am :
Thank you. :) I'm sure you write very well.
 
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LoveEternally said...
May 20, 2012 at 12:30 pm:
You did a great job witing this piece! its so powerful and moving :D although it's sad it really has good imagry in it :D awsome job!
 
Wildflower30This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 21, 2012 at 12:12 pm :
So it made you sad? Good for me. :D Thank you very much!
 
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Studio_Riet said...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 12:19 am:
Awe. This is kind of sad sounding :( It's good though. I likes it. :)
 
Wildflower30This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 12:24 am :
It was meant to be that way. :) And thanks!
 
SweetSandyFlower replied...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 12:17 am :
So powerful and beautifully written. I love it so very very much
 
Wildflower30This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 21, 2012 at 12:13 pm :
Aw, thank you, thank you! :)
 
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Zachary12220 said...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 2:21 am:
great flow keep it up 4 1/2 stars! im such a critic. ;) comment my work back im passing out.
 
Wildflower30This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 2:24 am :
Thank you. That's good enough, I guess! And yeah, man. Phew. And will do.
 
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