Been There Done That

December 16, 2011
By chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its just another chapter in the past just turn the page dont close the book.


the girl with the hips
a little too wide
whom pretty girls have bullied
and damaged her pride
they hit and punch with words
she cries and hides
and burrows down deep
down deep inside
all of the unspoken
words from her lips
are swallowed in mouthfuls
of sweet salty chips
a cold callused heart
not yet ripe for the picking
now damaged by a dart
the blood started dripping
she felt again
she wanted more
she let the blade bite
till her arms were sore
can you see her laughter
she wont show you her pain
can u see her smile
she thinks theres nothing to gain

a grin
instead of a tear
she wont listen to me
when ive already been here



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on Apr. 4 2012 at 9:32 am
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I really liked this poem. I've never really been bullied, but I see it happen all the time. (I try to stop it if I can.) Keep writing and check out my page, please :)

on Jan. 17 2012 at 10:20 am
chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its just another chapter in the past just turn the page dont close the book.

i was talking to myself to be honest lol but thanks!!

Snowi BRONZE said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 6:03 pm
Snowi BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
I am me deal wit it.

i feel for this girl, and you. i know what it's like to be the victum of words and other things. i know what it's like to have the blade dig deep. i'm sorry for you and her. i hope it gets better great way to say it. amazing poem. insparational i'd say. and really i don't say that a lot. thanks. AMAZING now and always

on Jan. 12 2012 at 5:50 pm
EternallyMe03 SILVER, BIRMINGHAM, Alabama
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Very nice- I really appreciate the part about the heart- it was a great visual.


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