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Glass Bottle

Everything gets kept inside.
A cork is put atop to keep it there.
What might I find?
A penny for wishing,
A leaf to believe,
A string of thread to remember... What?
A paper clip to keep my thoughts together,
A four-leaf clover for luck,
A smile for patience.
All these things I keep with me
Close to my heart; they will stay.
This thing I speak of floats around.
Around and around and around,
Through the water of my body.
Where it ends up, no one knows.
How it gets there, a mystery.
When it arrives, no one can control.
It is destiny kept inside.
What?
It will always be a question.




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MiraStorm This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 1:01 pm:
this was such a creative poem! i love all the things you said could be inside... especially the string of thread to remember. that was my favorite. one thing that I didn't like was the first line. if you use a different word than "gets" it will sound a lot more poetic. i really love this poem though!
 
foreverred14 replied...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 5:01 pm :
Thanks! (: Im glad you like it! I wrote it out of boredom in health class haha
 
MiraStorm This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 5:27 pm :
wow i wish i could be that creative when im trying to keep my eyes open in health class! o and fyi i added this poem to my favorites =)
 
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foreverred14 said...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 6:37 pm:
If you like my poem please comment. Just that would mean the world to me! Even if you don't like it, please comment
 
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