could you tell

December 1, 2011
By Traceyacey GOLD, Eagleville, Pennsylvania
Traceyacey GOLD, Eagleville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Dont you ever let a soul in the world tell you you cant be exactly who you are. -lady Gaga
Lady Gaga is so fn awesome she supports us emotionally everyday cause your on the right track baby you were born this way.

I fell into your eyes
I fell under your smile
I drowned in all you said
All your words came out perfect
You had me hanging by a thread

I followed you around
I begged for you to stay
Though you did never see it
You saw just me in my vane

Yodidnt’t see my longing
Yodidnt’t see my heart
You can’t feel the way I feel
You don’t understand that part

I tried to let you realize
I tried to tell you softly
I played around with some words
Words I wrote intentionally

Though tell
Tell me honestly
Could you tell

Could you see my face light up
Could you see me smile?

Did you hear the way I laughed?
Did you see my feelings pour out?

Could you tell?
Cause if you can’t I’m screwed

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