Wanting freedom

December 7, 2011
By Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
27 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.”


How I long to be free

Not bound to the earth

To go where I please

To soar through the sky

To spread my wings and fly

To forget all my pain and
depression

To see the light at the end of the
tunnel

But I can not

I have no wings

I have no freedom

I can’t get rid of my problems

With the snap of my fingers

So I’m just stuck

With my feet on the ground

With my head in the sky


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on Jan. 9 2012 at 3:09 pm
Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.”

thanks for the adive

on Jan. 6 2012 at 10:05 pm
PhoenixCrossing GOLD, Tinley Park, Illinois
14 articles 0 photos 179 comments
Hm I like the meaning and theme behind this piece. You're getting closer to portraying strong emotions here. My suggestion for this piece specifically is to find a rhyme and meter and stick to it. And if you're not going to have one, then don't have one. Try to stick to one or the other so your work flows more.

on Jan. 5 2012 at 4:13 pm
Nicole__G PLATINUM, Delmar, New York
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i really like this. the ever present longing to be free, but it can never be


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