Wanting freedom

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How I long to be free

Not bound to the earth

To go where I please

To soar through the sky

To spread my wings and fly

To forget all my pain and
depression

To see the light at the end of the
tunnel

But I can not

I have no wings

I have no freedom

I can’t get rid of my problems

With the snap of my fingers

So I’m just stuck

With my feet on the ground

With my head in the sky





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MoraleAsh said...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 10:05 pm
Hm I like the meaning and theme behind this piece. You're getting closer to portraying strong emotions here. My suggestion for this piece specifically is to find a rhyme and meter and stick to it. And if you're not going to have one, then don't have one. Try to stick to one or the other so your work flows more.
 
Goddess replied...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 3:09 pm
thanks for the adive
 
Nicole__G said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 4:13 pm
i really like this. the ever present longing to be free, but it can never be
 
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