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Let Me Breathe Again

December 22, 2011
By loveisreal4781 SILVER, Irving, Texas
loveisreal4781 SILVER, Irving, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"With me poetry has not been a purpose, but a passion."


If i told you the truth would you leave?
Would you walk away or stay with me?
You know i love you but every moment i spend with you kills me,
Please let me live,
Let me breathe,
Each day i spend in your lies hurts me more,
If you ever have loved me let me go,
My misery would subside,
This pain takes my breath away,
I no longer live,
I am the shell of the woman i once was,
Only you can set me free,
Give me my life back,
I beg and plead,
My captor, savior, and love,
Let me be alone to heal,

My heart is yours and so is my soul,
You say you need my love and saving,
When how can this be,
You lie and cheat,
Then make excuses,
You're like fire,one moment beautiful then you burn me and leave scars for everyone to see,
One day i hope to be able to runaway,
To be free,alone,and by myself.



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on Dec. 24 2011 at 9:47 pm
loveisreal4781 SILVER, Irving, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"With me poetry has not been a purpose, but a passion."

Thanks for your feedback i try hard to put my feelings into my poems

on Dec. 24 2011 at 9:46 pm
loveisreal4781 SILVER, Irving, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"With me poetry has not been a purpose, but a passion."

thankyou so much that means alot

on Dec. 24 2011 at 5:21 pm
tmynderup BRONZE, Hanford, California
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I really like your poem and I think most people can relate to it no matter what. :)

on Dec. 24 2011 at 11:47 am
ashlyn939 PLATINUM, Lynchburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Love means holding on to someone just as hard as you can because if you don't, one blink and they might disappear... forever." -Ellen Hopkins, Impulse

This is really good:) I love the way you put your feelings into this!