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When I see you. I see endless happiness.
When i think of you it is like i am frozen and the only cure is you
when i look int o your eyes i know that you are my life, no my universe.
and when i want to tell you that i love you
and i wont ever let you go.
Even before i leave this earth i know our love is true.
Next time i see you i will be sorry i left you early.
but when i see you even more and i will never let you go.
because my love for you is endless and ETERNAL.





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InvisibleHeart said...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 5:36 pm
Lovely. Very sweet and heart felt poem!
 
hotshot replied...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 5:49 pm
thanks invis :)
 
HiddenAngelInTheDark said...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 7:37 pm
Amazing :) i can really relate its so beautiful keep up the good work
 
hotshot replied...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 7:41 pm
thanks :) i am really glad you liked it
 
HiddenAngelInTheDark replied...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 7:43 pm
You're welcome Ky and I hope to read more of you're work soon
 
hotshot replied...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 7:44 pm
all you got to do is ask :)
 
HiddenAngelInTheDark replied...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 7:45 pm
Alright then
 
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