In Search Of GOD

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Peoples used to go in Churches, Mosques and Temples,
In order to find GOD,
In search of GOD,
But they don't know,
that
GOD lives in hearts,
not in stone buildings...!





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CrystalAngelDol said...
May 20, 2012 at 1:37 pm
lol that poem finished before it even started, anyway good job
 
eliana924 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 1:47 pm
Nice idea, but I think the language leaves something to be desired. I also don't like the "...!"
 
cookiegirl said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 9:18 am
Nice poem:).
 
A.A.Siyal replied...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 11:43 am
thanx cookie... :)
 
poetidea_myworld_22 said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 9:17 am
i loved it :)
 
A.A.Siyal replied...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 11:43 am
thanx... :)
 
Muzee3 said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 2:27 am
Beautiful..... Its fine but u cud add some more lines... ;)
 
A.A.Siyal replied...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 5:07 am
hmmmm... thnx muzee... it waz long 1, bt i choose some lines... ok i'll publish full 1 later on... :)
 
adorable said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 12:20 am
superbb.i wishhed 4 sm more stanzas......:)
 
A.A.Siyal replied...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 12:26 am
hmmmmmm... it waz a long 1... i wrote... bt i send jst this one... ;)
 
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