Freedom of Accomplishment

December 15, 2011
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Running faster I pace myself,
Feeling the burn through out my body,
It feels so good,
I never want to stop,
I feel the freedom that no one one has to offer,
A freedom of mind,
A freedom of strength,
A freedom of control,
It's all up to me to keep things going,
My heart is pounding!
I start to sweat!
Just as I get to my goal,
a feeling in me is released.
I've done it!
And no one but me got me here.
What a reward it is to be free.

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Zevi said...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 1:33 pm
OK apply this to your other poem. We are in control of the choices we make! Those choices come with a result, Making the right choices leads us to the freedom of the Olam HaBah.
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