December 15, 2011
By , New City, NY
When people look at me, most only see what’s on the surface:
My brown hair,
My brown eyes,
A female teen with a good sense of humor,
A kind-hearted person.
The rest are able to look a little deeper into my true self:
My disheveled appearance,
Dark circles under my eyes,
A fake smile,
Internally messy,
The scars on my heart.
No one will bother to look even deeper, into the part that I hide even from myself.
The part I want no one to see:
An insomniac,
A child afraid of rejection,


The future
The clawing insanity,
A person who tries too hard,
The gashes in my chest,
A little girl who has lost her way.
What will you see in me?

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country-cutie said...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 9:41 am
thats so good it reminds me of me sometimes but i like it alike good job
hotshot said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 9:19 pm
this gave me some chills. it speaks the truth all the way through and its well written. truly remarkable how you read not just your readers but what our true emotions show and want to save hidden somewhere. well done
haley854 said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 3:05 pm
I like it!
Ms.Attitude06 said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 1:31 pm
You've got to enjoy buddy! It's an awsum piece. :)
recurring_resilience said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 10:38 am
Well written. ^^ Nice work anonymous.
alexb42621 said...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 3:23 pm
Love It. All about perception and the will to perceive people in a positive or negative way.
AlaskaGrown said...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 10:25 pm
This is really good. Love it
cookiegirl said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 7:42 am
This is beautiful and emotional. It's relatable. Nice job.
Wonderment said...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 7:37 pm
I like this. Its so relatable.
thefamoustapper said...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 6:24 pm
truly incredible, it made me cry for it's as if you described me. one of my favorites on the site. Thank you for writing this!
Goddess said...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 6:24 pm
i like it. u did a great job. keep on writing
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