The Tradgedy Also Known As Love

December 14, 2011
Surrendering to the divinity
Returning to an eternity
Walking through a field of gray
Drowning in a heartless bay
Autumn comes, it's finally here
But just as soon, the coldness is clear
Blackness consuming my poor old heart
A marionette, doing my part
Forever shattered
Forever broken
Piercing the redness 
Pain the perfect token
You push me away
Your embrace so cold
I cry in remembrance 
Of your warm forgotten hold

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Penguinzilla said...
Aug. 19, 2012 at 3:36 am
Very good. I like your creativeness :D
kaylatheninjaturtle said...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 9:23 am
This is really good! If you wouldn't mind taking a look at my work? It'd be greatly appreciated. Keep writing!
shmam7624 said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 10:42 am
I agree. It is very sad but I love the way you used your words. An amazing poem.
Imy_Spray said...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 2:01 pm
:'( wow I love this... so sad and perfectly put
Imy_Spray said...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 2:00 pm
:'( omg I love this... so sad
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