Amice mortis

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Sleeping, but still awake,
Dreaming, but seeing nothing,
Searching, but no ones there,
No one except death,
Death is my only friend,
The only thing i've ever known,
For you see,
Death is always with me,
Hiding in my midst,
Taking everyone away from me,
Leaving me alone and unloved,
In this world of cruelty and despair,
With no one to run to,
No one to comfort me,
So i raise this hand,
Close my eyes,
And slash,
Through my heart, my soul, my entire being,
Then nothing, death is upon me,
Finally taking me from this cruel and cold world,
To a better place, where i can be free,
So i welcome this, with open arms,
And i feel death surround me, tightening its grip,
And then my mind goes blank, my breathing stops, and my body goes numb,
And i'm gone, finally dead, with no fears or worries.





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exoticmind said...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 8:33 am
yes felt the same way
 
Jinko replied...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 12:38 am
It is for people like you that i post for. Im glad you were able to find some connection in my writings!
 
Matice said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 4:09 pm

I really liked how smoothly this poem flowed. You did a very good job. I'm sorry for everything you've gone through.

If you have a spare moment, I'd be honored if you were able to check out some of my work. I  really appreciate feedback.

 
Jinko replied...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 1:24 pm
Thank you! I'd be honored to look over some of your work and supply feedback.
 
Villangel said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 11:30 am
This is really powerful, I can feel the pain of the poem. I'm sorry for the people you've lost. I think you should keep writing down your emotions, like you said, it helps. This is a really exceptional poem.
 
Jinko replied...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 1:24 pm
Thank you so much! i really appreciate the feedback.
 
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