hiding places

December 7, 2011
By poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe


When I walk outside my mask goes on
no one knows the pain that I am holding inside
the past to heavy to bear
the pain is to wicked to forget

If no one sees then no one can hurt me
my hiding place is were i get my comfort
in the dark with silient tears running down my face
no one has to see here in my hiding place

The only peace I will ever get
is in my hiding place
with silent tears running down my face
this world will soon begin to fade

When my eyes open im not in peace
I am back were I began in a world that just causes me pain
the masks goes back on
will anyone care if i just end it all now

When the pain reaches me in my hiding place
I know theres no point in going any were anymore
my heart is looking for something more
never sleeping just crying the slient tears in my hiding place.


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on Jan. 4 2012 at 11:07 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

thank u so much

on Jan. 4 2012 at 11:07 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

thx u so much :)

on Jan. 4 2012 at 11:06 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

thank u so much

on Dec. 23 2011 at 9:18 am
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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This is amazing. I can really see the emoutions behind and its so relatable for me. Im adding this to my favs.

cookiegirl said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 9:17 am
Wow. This is beautiful, emotional, unique, well written poem:) I love this poem.

on Dec. 23 2011 at 9:17 am
miniko PLATINUM, Germantowm, Maryland
47 articles 20 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
i never said most of the things i said- yogi berra

omg so good...that is exactly how i feel 100% of the time...luv it


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