Unspoken Words

December 7, 2011
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The last of goodbye, he walks away.

I wanted to shout

Wait! I Love You!
But those words left unspoken, he

will never know.

After a big fight I had with my mom, those chanted curse words.
under my breath to ashambed
to say them out loud.

Poeople will never hear these
words I keep bottled up,
Fake smiles glisten to cover
what my mind so strongly
wishes to say.

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JaneCapelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 4:13 pm
I do like this poem, mostly because i can relate to it, and i like pretty much anything i can relate to, but i think it would've been better if you had ended the poem after the line, "will never know." Idk it just sounds good in my head that way, not trying to be mean or anything. But if you did end it there, that would be more unspoken words, wouldnt it? :/ hmm...well anyway, i'm still going to give it 5/5 cuz i do like it, and i would really appreciate if you could check out my poem "Unspoke... (more »)
katieyoung18 replied...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 9:44 pm
aww think you and i will, maybe we do
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