Unspoken Words

December 7, 2011
By katieyoung18 PLATINUM, Scottsboro, Alabama
katieyoung18 PLATINUM, Scottsboro, Alabama
33 articles 55 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.


The last of goodbye, he walks away.

I wanted to shout


Wait! I Love You!
But those words left unspoken, he


will never know.

After a big fight I had with my mom, those chanted curse words.
under my breath to ashambed
to say them out loud.

Poeople will never hear these
words I keep bottled up,
Fake smiles glisten to cover
what my mind so strongly
wishes to say.



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on Jan. 6 2012 at 9:44 pm
katieyoung18 PLATINUM, Scottsboro, Alabama
33 articles 55 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.

aww think you and i will, maybe we do

on Jan. 6 2012 at 4:13 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

I do like this poem, mostly because i can relate to it, and i like pretty much anything i can relate to, but i think it would've been better if you had ended the poem after the line, "will never know." Idk it just sounds good in my head that way, not trying to be mean or anything. But if you did end it there, that would be more unspoken words, wouldnt it? :/ hmm...well anyway, i'm still going to give it 5/5 cuz i do like it, and i would really appreciate if you could check out my poem "Unspoken" when it gets published on here. It's kind of similar to your poem, in the words-gone-unspoken way....i guess maybe we have something in common O.o


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