Defeat, a gain ....

December 8, 2011
By SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Arise, Awake and stop not till the goal is reached!


My life had fallen in a dark tunnel,
I saw nothing but only a 'fail',
anything I did, I had a defeat,
I had a downward hit!

Then God came in a heaven-ship in my dreams,
said," You're not trying to use the defeats, it seems,
for defeats don't hit anyone downwards,
they show you your mistake herds.

For If you try to learn something,
nothing can fail you defeats are what things!
learn you're mistakes from defeats
you'll surely get gain hits!"

The Ship is sailing over here
but it'll come back again,
and I'll remove my hearts pain,
And I'll have, from my defeat, gain
and from my defeat, a gain....


The author's comments:
Believe it or not, this has really happened with me when I was in grade 7! Just a day later I wrote the poem!

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on Feb. 6 2012 at 11:26 pm
SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Arise, Awake and stop not till the goal is reached!

thanks a lot!!!!!!

on Feb. 3 2012 at 5:37 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

Wow very inspiriational...and what an awesome experience that must have been! Great job and thanks for checking out my poem!


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