The Real Winter

December 8, 2011
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The meadows
They are under attack
Their beauty smothered

The cedars
Their sweeping bows reaching reaching out for a hug
One that they'll never get

The animals
Frozen, slumbering, or dead

It is the truth of winter
The mountains are under attack





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leafy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 2:24 pm
Ooh nice :). You're right, many people just say how pretty winter is, but don't think of the flip side of it. My only suggestion would be to either put a comma after the first "reaching" in the 5th line or just take one of the "reaching"s ours. But otherwise, very nice! :) 5/5
 
Nick5 replied...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 4:07 pm
It was a typo
 
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