Do Not Question Life

December 8, 2011
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Does sun question the meaninig of being,
whilst it revolves time after time,
or river question existence as it winds
through well travelled paths never knowing nor
seeing beginning nor end , no meaning nor crime
to question life; pitiful souls disillusion does find.

Life with reason is but race to a finish,
souls measures in speed not enjoyment been had,
rather treat life as wander through garden
measure no score, lest amusement diminish;
always remember; live on.

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CarrieAnn13 said...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 2:38 pm
Excellent work! I love the contemplating feeling I get from the first verse. Your style is very unique, especially here on TI. I think you could have shortened the phrases into many sentences instead of two long sentences, but that's only a minor thing. Other than that, great job and keep writing!
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