Tomorrow

November 15, 2011
By dancer25 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
dancer25 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
15 articles 16 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope will never be silent'


Will tomorrow be filled with pain;
or will tomorrow be the start of
something new?
Will I smile and and laugh;
or will I cry and weep?
Will I think about the tI'me I have
with my brother;
or will I think about how every
second could be his last.
Will I get back up after I'm put down;
or will I keep them keep me down
Will tomorrow be the day I stand up to her;
or will I just go another day
in an unaccepting house?
Will I pray that I get out of this
life;
or will I live every second
like it was my last?

Will I forgive and forget;
or will I hold on to those
memories that bind me.


The author's comments:
I have been fighting with my mom about something I told her over the summer and since then she doesn't accept what I told her. I have also been bullied at school for the same thing I told my mom.

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dancer25 GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 11:35 am
dancer25 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
15 articles 16 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope will never be silent'

thankyou!!

on Feb. 3 2012 at 8:05 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Always an honor to read new stuff of yours!:)

Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 5:13 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

From reading all of your current poems I can really tell that you like to express your feelings and problems through writing. I am the same way. I don't always write in poem form - but any type of writing is great therapy for me :) Nicely done, keep up the good work - especially if it is something you enjoy and helps you release some feelings. ;)

dancer25 GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 11:59 am
dancer25 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
15 articles 16 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope will never be silent'

thank you!!!!

on Jan. 30 2012 at 8:39 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

This is beautiful..I also know how this feels; I have went through the same thing, my whole life actually..it has amazing how much emotion is in this. Great Job!

dancer25 GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 6:10 pm
dancer25 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
15 articles 16 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope will never be silent'

thank you soo much!! you have no clue how excited i get wen i get comments :)

on Jan. 10 2012 at 5:14 pm
Nadds_67 SILVER, Rochester, New York
6 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Trust in the Lord with all your heart and lean not on your own understanding,in all your ways submit to him, and He will make your paths straight"- Proverbs 3:5-6

this poem is very good and emotional. i could actually feel the emotion while reading it, keep up the good work:)

dancer25 GOLD said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 12:31 pm
dancer25 GOLD, West Babylon, New York
15 articles 16 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope will never be silent'

on the 11th line the 1st keep is supposed to be let

on Dec. 20 2011 at 11:53 am
MeganRozalia BRONZE, N/a, New York
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"shoot for the moon. even if you miss, you'll land among the stars"

meg...this is beautiful...i acctually teared up. ok? ok.


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