Promise to make you fine ....

December 7, 2011
By SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Arise, Awake and stop not till the goal is reached!


Mother, Oh Mother
We Beg mercy thine
devastated and destroyed thee,
we swear to make you fine.

Oh Mother, thy pleasant blue sky
where the chirps were playin ,
has become devil's black sky
but we swear to make it fine.

Oh mother thy pretty blossoms
which gloomed like the sun shine,
we made them sad and ugly
but we swear to make them fine

Oh mother, we are just killing you
still we whine, still we whine
devastated and destroyed thee,
But we Promise to make you fine!

The author's comments:
Its just that our more n more comfortable life is making troubles for our mother earth! So we should take a pledge to end our dear mother's troubles! :D

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on Nov. 19 2014 at 8:03 am
SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
8 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise, Awake and stop not till the goal is reached!

/\ Thank you...

on Feb. 3 2012 at 10:42 am
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

this is great!! emotion and emphasis is awesome!


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