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Promise to make you fine ....

Mother, Oh Mother
We Beg mercy thine
devastated and destroyed thee,
we swear to make you fine.

Oh Mother, thy pleasant blue sky
where the chirps were playin ,
has become devil's black sky
but we swear to make it fine.

Oh mother thy pretty blossoms
which gloomed like the sun shine,
we made them sad and ugly
but we swear to make them fine

Oh mother, we are just killing you
still we whine, still we whine
devastated and destroyed thee,
But we Promise to make you fine!



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SLim_SHaDyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 19 at 8:03 am
/\ Thank you...
 
scenesoccerqueen said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 10:42 am
this is great!! emotion and emphasis is awesome!
 
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