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My Soul's Crying

When I was five
you told me that whenever it rained
that it was my soul crying
I asked "How Mommy?"
You said that my soul was so huge that if I'd drown
in my tears
now looking at your grave
I remember that day perfectly
'cause I can't seem to cry now
so I'll leave it to my soul
I look up at the cloudy gray sky
and watch my first tear drop down from the sky
I watch the rest falling down so hard
I remember that day
I remember this day
My soul is crying pleading for you
My tears follow too



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Nella.Girl97This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 9 at 10:43 am
U have a unique and beautiful style of writing! Keep on writing!
 
Silver2blackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 9:47 am
Very good Amie, Cute and lovely :) 4/5
 
GGLovesLife said...
Oct. 23, 2012 at 5:23 pm
Amie!! I do... if you knew about Iowans, everyy girl and boy has one! :D I'm just saying good luck. :)
 
AmieLeeHope replied...
Oct. 24, 2012 at 9:38 am
Iowans? I have no idea. :P@GG
 
AmieLeeHope replied...
Oct. 24, 2012 at 9:44 am
What is Iowans??
 
AmieLeeHope said...
Oct. 23, 2012 at 9:30 am
Thank you. XD
 
GGLovesLife said...
Oct. 22, 2012 at 1:36 pm
Hello! :) I like your stuff a lot! P.S. You said you'd get me to tell you my #.. darling, ain't gonna happen. :D
 
AmieLeeHope replied...
Oct. 23, 2012 at 9:29 am
Trust me I will. Or maybe your saying that because you don't have a #. Your just a little boy. :P Thanks anyway. XD
 
Blaque said...
Oct. 19, 2012 at 11:43 am
poems that come from the heart of the randomist times are sometimes the ones that truely matter.
 
BlueSunset said...
Oct. 9, 2012 at 9:03 am
Love it :-) really cute x more poems like these please
 
Hannabug said...
Oct. 2, 2012 at 11:53 am
I LOVE THIS!!!
 
compassion said...
Oct. 1, 2012 at 9:46 am
Poignant!love it!
 
PaigeMathis said...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 6:39 am
This is really really good! I loved it. Well done :)
 
alex said...
Sept. 13, 2012 at 2:48 pm
nice stuff
 
IamtheshyStargirl said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 2:21 pm
Oh my goodness! This is so... Poetic! I love this, love this, love this!
 
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