I'm falling for her

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Waiting for that day
To come and take me away
That day I learn to love,
And I ride on the wings of a dove

I’m still waiting for someone to wipe away my tears
Someone to take my hand and lead me away
From this world of pain
Someone to hold me tight all through the night

I think I may have found you
Never knew it would happen like this…
One simple kiss took us away
Led us both down a road we didn’t know

The way she hurts day and night,
I just wish I could take it all away
I care so much, yet, she doesn’t see
What she truly means to me

She makes my heart beat faster
The way she kisses my neck
The way she leans into me when I hold her tight
Not wanting to let her go on her own tonight





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raindance72 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 6:09 pm
It was pretty cliche, but I still liked it. It was well written overall. You should watch the rhythms; here and there they slip. Great job though, keep writing! :)
 
beachgal123 replied...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 8:11 am
it wasnt suppose to rhyme but thanks
 
raindance72 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 6:19 pm
Yes, I know; it's more a flow thing than a rhyming thing in my opinion, but that's just me.
 
beachgal123 replied...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 7:39 am
yea thanks for the opinions though i like knowing what ppl think of my work
 
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