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I'm falling for her

December 7, 2011
By ashlyn939 PLATINUM, Lynchburg, Virginia
ashlyn939 PLATINUM, Lynchburg, Virginia
34 articles 14 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love means holding on to someone just as hard as you can because if you don't, one blink and they might disappear... forever." -Ellen Hopkins, Impulse


Waiting for that day
To come and take me away
That day I learn to love,
And I ride on the wings of a dove

I’m still waiting for someone to wipe away my tears
Someone to take my hand and lead me away
From this world of pain
Someone to hold me tight all through the night

I think I may have found you
Never knew it would happen like this…
One simple kiss took us away
Led us both down a road we didn’t know

The way she hurts day and night,
I just wish I could take it all away
I care so much, yet, she doesn’t see
What she truly means to me

She makes my heart beat faster
The way she kisses my neck
The way she leans into me when I hold her tight
Not wanting to let her go on her own tonight



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on Jan. 13 2012 at 7:39 am
ashlyn939 PLATINUM, Lynchburg, Virginia
34 articles 14 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love means holding on to someone just as hard as you can because if you don't, one blink and they might disappear... forever." -Ellen Hopkins, Impulse

yea thanks for the opinions though i like knowing what ppl think of my work

byebye said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 6:19 pm
byebye, Nevermore, Other
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Yes, I know; it's more a flow thing than a rhyming thing in my opinion, but that's just me.

on Jan. 9 2012 at 8:11 am
ashlyn939 PLATINUM, Lynchburg, Virginia
34 articles 14 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love means holding on to someone just as hard as you can because if you don't, one blink and they might disappear... forever." -Ellen Hopkins, Impulse

it wasnt suppose to rhyme but thanks

byebye said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 6:09 pm
byebye, Nevermore, Other
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It was pretty cliche, but I still liked it. It was well written overall. You should watch the rhythms; here and there they slip. Great job though, keep writing! :)