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day after day

December 12, 2011
By Renne,AmberDDD SILVER, Great Valley, New York
Renne,AmberDDD SILVER, Great Valley, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"You can't make lemomade with out the lemons"


day after day i wonder the way
and sometimes what to say
should it be under restriction
because sometimes its a addiction
the way you smell i tend to dwell on sometimes i depend on this way so day after day this is what i say



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on Dec. 18 2011 at 1:39 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
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This could use some work -- the rhyming is very forced, and you have some spelling and grammar mistakes ("an addiction", not "a addiction"; "I" should be capitolized, etc).

It's very vague -- I can only barely get an idea of what you're saying.

Keep working on it.