Rose Heart

December 13, 2011
By AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Evil is when the good do nothing"


In my heart there was a seed
The seed was dark and small
And from it sprouted a rose

The rose's petals were red as blood
The rose's leaves was greener then green
The rose's thorns were black as night

Inside my heart,
The rose flourished,
For you were my sun, my water.

Then one day a chill came across me
And burned the rose with it's cold
The petals browned and fell
The leaves withered and became black

So soon there was only a thorny stick

Fear me, my love
For it was you that made my heart cruel
Hate me, my sweet
For without a heart I am nothing

For I was wrong, darling
You are not the sun, nor are you water
You are an ice cold storm
Full of burning cold


The author's comments:
This is a poem from the collection I'm writing, called 'Voices of the Heart' hope you like it!

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Kipitama GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 6:00 pm
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Fantastically Beautiful...or the other way around :)

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 6:00 pm
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Fantastically Beautiful...or the other way around :)

Kipitama GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 5:59 pm
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
12 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Fantastically Beautiful...or the other way around....:)

on Feb. 16 2012 at 8:37 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Wow! I love this! Great Job! 5 Stars for you!:) Keep up the amazing work!

butterfly123 said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 9:37 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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i love the last two lines! great piece! 5/5 from me

on Jan. 5 2012 at 1:19 pm
fryewriter SILVER, Hickory, North Carolina
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Wow, I really love that last line. It finishes the poem perfectly, and has a great effect on the meaning!

on Jan. 3 2012 at 7:55 am
youngspeare BRONZE, Nairobi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
We wouldn't ask a rose that grew from the concrete for having damaged petals; in turn we'd all celebrate its tenacity, we'd all love tz will to reach the sun well we are the roses n these are my damaged petals don't ask me why thank God and ask me how

great poem! Keep posting :-) think you could check out my work? I'd really appreciate it.

on Jan. 2 2012 at 10:46 am
swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
17 articles 5 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If someone were to pay you 10 cents for every kind word you ever spoke and collect 5 cents for every unkind word, would you be rich or poor?"

I love it. It is very well organized, very well written. The emotion was easily conveyed and your denotation was good. Critics: Although your denotation was good, it could have being better. try working on it and your poems will be very very successful.

on Jan. 2 2012 at 10:46 am
U2_Fanatic GOLD, Westbury, Other
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This is beautiful! Best part: "For I was wrong, darling, You are not the sun, nor are you the water."

Rain. SILVER said...
on Jan. 2 2012 at 10:42 am
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

very descriptive keep up the good work(:

on Dec. 30 2011 at 1:46 pm
Jappyalldayeveryday, Detroit, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
They say that good things take time, but really great things happen in the blink of an eye

I absolutely love this, it's amazing.

on Dec. 29 2011 at 6:37 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

WOw..... nice going with expression.. Keep it up!


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