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What If?

December 13, 2011
By chickenpik BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
chickenpik BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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What if?
What if we don’t agree?
What if you disrespect me?
What if you don’t care?

What if you don’t listen to me?
What if my opinions don’t matter to you?
What if I’m sick of it?
What if you don’t care?

What if I’m not backing down?
What if I’m not ready?
What if we both made mistakes?
What if you don’t care?

What if I want out?
What if you apologize but don’t really mean it?
What if I’m just plain confused?
What if you don’t care?

Why don’t we stop this?
Why don’t we work it out?
Why don’t we just move on?
WHY DON’T YOU CARE??!!



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on Dec. 18 2011 at 9:12 pm
chickenpik BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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Thanks so much! That means a lot to me:)

on Dec. 16 2011 at 11:30 am
QueenOfMars GOLD, Mumbai, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep.
And miles to go before I sleep
And miles to go before I sleep"

One word: WONDERFUL!

on Dec. 16 2011 at 11:12 am
Karles_Ivy PLATINUM, Sunnyside, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes the bully isn’t the captain of the cheerleaders or the girl who for some reason has it out for only you; sometimes the worst bully of them all is you.- Karles_Ivy

I really love this, especially because I can relate to the ever wondering feel of the poem. You have great use of repetion and alitteration, keep writing.!