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loves first impression

December 13, 2011
By birtha SILVER, California, Minnesota
birtha SILVER, California, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
bite me


As you were talking you caught my eye
Your eyes were beautiful and loving
We weren’t alone
But felt as if we were
When you smiled
I felt my heart leap
Until I saw you
My heart was lost
We felt we belonged together
But new it would never work
My soul has been pining for his
And it does not know how to let go yet
But I am sure if we tried
You could lift my spirit
As if I was in a constant dream
Just thinking of you could bring
My mind to a perfect thought
As if I was in your arms
This very moment


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on Dec. 16 2011 at 11:14 am
Karles_Ivy PLATINUM, Sunnyside, Washington
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Sometimes the bully isn’t the captain of the cheerleaders or the girl who for some reason has it out for only you; sometimes the worst bully of them all is you.- Karles_Ivy

I LOVE THIS.! This is very relatable, very well well written, and very amazing.! You have talent. 

on Dec. 15 2011 at 11:32 am
shelby_kat DIAMOND, Warren, Ohio
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"I can sum up everything I've learned about life in three words; it goes on." -Robert Frost

This is a very deep grat poem :) its definately something everyone can relate to.