Chain Link

December 13, 2011
By zadiekatie23 PLATINUM, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
zadiekatie23 PLATINUM, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
39 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." - Dr. Seuss


Were the sun my sky
I would jump headfirst
Into the stars
The world's a lonely place
Would space suffice?
Along with me was brung
A gold coin
I collapse into tears
Knowing that
However high
However far I jump
I still won't reach
You.
Or can I?



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on Dec. 17 2011 at 2:09 pm
SavannahMcKenna PLATINUM, Waterman, Illinois
30 articles 2 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream a better dream

veryyyy good...i like the ending as a question... check me out?

taylor1226 said...
on Dec. 17 2011 at 1:51 pm
taylor1226, Alexandria, Virginia
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grrs.

very good.check out my work please.:P

on Dec. 16 2011 at 4:05 pm
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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This is amazing!  It is really really good!

on Dec. 16 2011 at 8:48 am
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Ooh, this is really cool. I love the beginning: "Were the sun my sky I would jump headfirst into the stars."

on Dec. 15 2011 at 6:50 pm
poet.lover PLATINUM, Pineville, Pennsylvania
20 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never part without loving words to think of during your absence. It may be that you will not meet again in this life."

I love how simple this is but how deep the emotion is. Great job! maybe check out some of my work (:

asofnow GOLD said...
on Dec. 15 2011 at 1:56 pm
asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
18 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing gold can stay ~ Robert Frost

I like; please check out my work too.

;)


on Dec. 15 2011 at 11:28 am
shelby_kat DIAMOND, Warren, Ohio
72 articles 3 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can sum up everything I've learned about life in three words; it goes on." -Robert Frost

Very nice. :) Kutos


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