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December 13, 2011
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Were the sun my sky
I would jump headfirst
Into the stars
The world's a lonely place
Would space suffice?
Along with me was brung
A gold coin
I collapse into tears
Knowing that
However high
However far I jump
I still won't reach
You.
Or can I?





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SavannahMcKenna said...
Dec. 17, 2011 at 2:09 pm
veryyyy good...i like the ending as a question... check me out?
 
julywinters1226 said...
Dec. 17, 2011 at 1:51 pm
very good.check out my work please.:P
 
brax34 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 4:05 pm
This is amazing!  It is really really good!
 
Mandiella This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 8:48 am
Ooh, this is really cool. I love the beginning: "Were the sun my sky I would jump headfirst into the stars."
 
poet.lover said...
Dec. 15, 2011 at 6:50 pm
I love how simple this is but how deep the emotion is. Great job! maybe check out some of my work (:
 
zhlen This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 15, 2011 at 1:56 pm

I like; please check out my work too.

;)

 
percussionnerd1200 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 15, 2011 at 11:28 am
Very nice. :) Kutos
 
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