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Pushing you away
will never be far enough.
These kisses that filled our silences
fall like stars from the now-empty sky.
There was nothing there
to begin with, my love.
So I'll cut theses stitches.
Sever the ties.
Scatter away these remnants of you.
Stop crying.
I can't regret this anymore.
I hate you.
... I love you.

Lend me your heart
so I can break it again.



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RejoiceTheySay... said...
Dec. 19, 2011 at 2:32 am:
i feel you
 
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Anonymous01This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 4:03 pm:
Wow, this poem is amazing! i love it! great work :]
 
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wenesday1234 said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 11:05 am:
great poem...i love it, i know how you feel if you hav eever felt this way
 
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Ally1832 said...
Dec. 17, 2011 at 9:03 am:

Oh wow. I loved this...It speaks to you!

 

 
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kairi.kaylynThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 9:56 pm:
Your words were beautifully strong and great, I loved it.
 
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babysteps said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 7:57 pm:
I love this especially the ending very...powerful 5 stars!
 
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ALR107 said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 6:40 pm:
Great poem, although it was a little strange, I still liked it! :)
 
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julywinters1226 said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 12:42 pm:
very powerful words full of emotion.I can relate to the feelings in the poem.I'm just getting over my breakup from yesterday and this made me feel better so thanks.:)
 
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Villangel said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 11:29 am:
A little dark at the end, but nevertheless it was truly exceptional.! I agree with Mandiella, thatlasttwo lines were really powerful.!
 
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AngelGrahamThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 9:47 am:
i love this poem! i recently went though two break up and the first one felt like that. this poem expresses love to a direct point.
 
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Mandiella This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 8:46 am:
Wow, this is really good! I love the last two lines. Very powerful!
 
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percussionnerd1200 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 15, 2011 at 11:28 am:
I really really really loved this poem :)
 
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