Revenge

December 13, 2011
By K-Siprelle GOLD, Maryville, Tennessee
K-Siprelle GOLD, Maryville, Tennessee
10 articles 3 photos 8 comments

Pushing you away
will never be far enough.
These kisses that filled our silences
fall like stars from the now-empty sky.
There was nothing there
to begin with, my love.
So I'll cut theses stitches.
Sever the ties.
Scatter away these remnants of you.
Stop crying.
I can't regret this anymore.
I hate you.
... I love you.

Lend me your heart
so I can break it again.



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on Dec. 19 2011 at 2:32 am
RejoiceTheySay... PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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i feel you

on Dec. 18 2011 at 4:03 pm
Anonymous01 PLATINUM, Baldwinsvillle, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed."
-Ernest Hemingway

Wow, this poem is amazing! i love it! great work :]

on Dec. 18 2011 at 11:05 am
wenesday1234 BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
best freinds: you cry i cry you laugh i laugh you fight i fight you hurt i hurt you jump off a brige i get in a paddle boat an dsave you

great poem...i love it, i know how you feel if you hav eever felt this way

on Dec. 17 2011 at 9:03 am
Ally1832 SILVER, Bark River, Michigan
5 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wipe away the tears and walk away

Oh wow. I loved this...It speaks to you!

 


on Dec. 16 2011 at 9:56 pm
MarissaWhitecloud SILVER, Oskaloosa, Iowa
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Your words were beautifully strong and great, I loved it.

babysteps GOLD said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 7:57 pm
babysteps GOLD, Wayland, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind."
~Mahatma Gandhi

I love this especially the ending very...powerful 5 stars!

ALR107 said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 6:40 pm
ALR107, Boise, Idaho
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Great poem, although it was a little strange, I still liked it! :)

taylor1226 said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 12:42 pm
taylor1226, Alexandria, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
grrs.

very powerful words full of emotion.I can relate to the feelings in the poem.I'm just getting over my breakup from yesterday and this made me feel better so thanks.:)

on Dec. 16 2011 at 11:29 am
Karles_Ivy PLATINUM, Sunnyside, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes the bully isn’t the captain of the cheerleaders or the girl who for some reason has it out for only you; sometimes the worst bully of them all is you.- Karles_Ivy

A little dark at the end, but nevertheless it was truly exceptional.! I agree with Mandiella, thatlasttwo lines were really powerful.!

on Dec. 16 2011 at 9:47 am
AngelGraham GOLD, Nashville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
death is guaranteed and life is a given so quit living as if you have tomorrow.

i love this poem! i recently went though two break up and the first one felt like that. this poem expresses love to a direct point.

on Dec. 16 2011 at 8:46 am
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Wow, this is really good! I love the last two lines. Very powerful!

on Dec. 15 2011 at 11:28 am
shelby_kat DIAMOND, Warren, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I can sum up everything I've learned about life in three words; it goes on." -Robert Frost

I really really really loved this poem :)


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