What I Could Never Tell My Mother This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

What I could never tell my mother
Isn’t her fault; it’s mine
It’s things wrapped inside of me, coiled like wire with the filament exposed
She could accept them – those things – I’m sure
Maybe even love them the way she loves me; little puzzle pieces
That fell out of the box when we were putting it under the sofa
After we almost finished the puzzle together
But I hide them inside my deepest aorta
Keeping them safe because who wants to grab a still-beating heart?
It would kill me to take those secrets out
So my mother may know they exist
But she lets me keep them.
And maybe that’s the real secret, the one that
She doesn’t know –
It’s that I need some secrets of my own.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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tdpackerfan said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 1:37 pm
The poet did a nice job of capturing the emotional conflict of the societal teenager. Ultimately , it is very likely that many will be able to conenct with this poem and relate to its central theme. The poet is successful because he or she has found a way to establish that connection with the reader.
JYazzmen said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 8:32 am
i loved this poem i can really relate to it 'cause i can't fathom the way my mom would react to some of my stuff
Piper S. said...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 1:27 pm
The truth in this poem is really relatable for me! I loved the comparison about the beating heart. I had to read the poem a couple of times because it left me wondering. The secrets theme was great.
Toby. said...
Mar. 25, 2012 at 5:29 pm
here's so much my mom doesn't know
Kianie_B. said...
Mar. 6, 2012 at 1:54 pm
This poem is soooo relatable! :] Although I may tell my mom some secrets, I definatley might need to keep some to myself. Great job!
otherpoet said...
Feb. 13, 2012 at 9:44 pm
I love this piece because I can remember telling my mother everything, and now I tell her almost nothing of what goes on in my head. This piece is so relatable. Great writing!
C.A.Walt This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 13, 2012 at 9:04 am
i love the truth in this!! amazing
laurensoccer This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 9:35 pm
This piece is so beautiful and moving. It is so genuine. Please keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!
WeAllBurn said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 1:49 pm
This was a fantastic piece of work, seriously. I loved this soooo much
ElleNicole said...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 9:29 am
Nice job. Mind checking out my work? Thanks if you do! =)
Schuyler said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 1:03 pm
I really enjoy your poem its great. The tone of your poem sounds to that its alright to keep some secrets of your own and your mother will be okay with that .
youngspeare said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 7:09 am
Mind-blowing! It's fantastic :) 
think you could check out my work sometime? Would really appreciate it. 
meadowood said...
Nov. 17, 2011 at 9:46 pm
Wow really great! You expressed something that a lot of us understand in a really creative, artistic manner. <3 the metaphor!
BrownEyeGirl said...
Nov. 17, 2011 at 7:32 pm
its relly good i love it . its how i feel about me and my mother . i couldnt let her know some of my secrets either . but i thimk its amahzing how you can express that in a poem
a darkness said...
Nov. 17, 2011 at 2:33 pm
i love this it is the same way i feel
Kpalo14 said...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 9:13 am
very good poem!
Sweet-thoughts said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 10:21 pm
woa i feel the same way....
ms.liz2015 said...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 11:25 am
good very alsome
ms.liz2015 said...
Oct. 26, 2011 at 11:24 am
wow i love it. My story right hear.
breakingfree said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 11:06 pm
love it!! story of my life, right here.
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