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What I Could Never Tell My Mother This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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What I could never tell my mother
Isn’t her fault; it’s mine
It’s things wrapped inside of me, coiled like wire with the filament exposed
She could accept them – those things – I’m sure
Maybe even love them the way she loves me; little puzzle pieces
That fell out of the box when we were putting it under the sofa
After we almost finished the puzzle together
But I hide them inside my deepest aorta
Keeping them safe because who wants to grab a still-beating heart?
It would kill me to take those secrets out
So my mother may know they exist
But she lets me keep them.
And maybe that’s the real secret, the one that
Shhhh
She doesn’t know –
It’s that I need some secrets of my own.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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i<3you said...
Mar. 2, 2009 at 3:36 pm
hmm...
 
oruga101 said...
Feb. 26, 2009 at 2:54 am
That was very interesting. And aorta was a nice fresh word that I haven't seen in a while. The whole thing gave off a hushed vibe that kept me interested.
Congrats on getting published!

If you don't mind, please go read, rate, and comment on my poem. Please!

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ckalani said...
Feb. 15, 2009 at 10:21 pm
That was very good. Please, go and reag my article in the Heros section. It's titled ,"Freedom".
 
Flux_Day said...
Feb. 13, 2009 at 4:11 pm
Reminds me of faerie tales and the way your mind wonders into letting you think there are other worlds out there...
 
JillianHale said...
Feb. 16, 2009 at 11:11 pm
Very good:] keep writing :]
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mcBut3r said...
Feb. 16, 2009 at 8:14 pm
i really liked this poem alot. its true when your a teenager and ur growing up...
 
A No Knee Mouse said...
Feb. 6, 2009 at 12:33 am
This poem sorta relates to what i'm going through right now. Very good! I wish i was that good of a writer...
 
Nicovera said...
Feb. 4, 2009 at 12:36 pm
wow. I loved this poem! Especially the reference to puzzle pieces. My mom and I used to put puzzles together all the time! This poem is very clean and to the point, and very origonal.
 
sahsia102 said...
Feb. 4, 2009 at 5:06 pm
This poem depicts perfectly the sentiments of having a secret you can't express. I love it! Please write more!
 
lollygager101 said...
Jan. 24, 2009 at 2:01 am
Great poem I am glad it was in the magazine!
 
X0RACHAELX014 said...
Jan. 14, 2009 at 1:26 pm
this is soo cute! its amazing i love every line of it. and ppl can rly relate to it, definatly me at least. but its rly good, great job :)
 
Flowerchild_711 said...
Jan. 7, 2009 at 1:29 am
This poem was really good.I like the part about secrets being like puzzle pieces because it is sooo true. I like how yu don't tell us what the secret is, because its not really important. Awesome job, wish i could write like this!!!
 
almost_there said...
Jan. 4, 2009 at 12:38 am
I like this, especially the part about how maybe the real secret is that curious need to protect things/secrets- even if the things themselves aren't that secret or needing to stay hidden, it is that inexplicable need to hide them. You carried that sentiment very well, and I think a lot of people can relate
 
twilight_girl<3 said...
Dec. 31, 2008 at 4:04 am
this poem is so true and its awsome. nice job.
 
Redemption65 said...
Dec. 14, 2008 at 2:53 pm
Good. I like how you do not tell the reader what the secret is, but I feel when you got to the climax of your poem your ending was too abrupt. There needed to be more.
 
martinkclarksvilletn said...
Dec. 12, 2008 at 3:23 am
secrets are important this poem is awesome!!!!!!
 
BlackDeathxxxiv said...
Feb. 25, 2009 at 8:48 pm
Great!!!! It was reaching out and grabbing me at every turn. Suprub.
I can't think of any other words to discribe it. I loved every minute of it.
 
wondergrl95 said...
Nov. 24, 2008 at 4:49 pm
wow, nice job!
 
ak92092 said...
Nov. 14, 2008 at 2:20 pm
i wanna no ur secret!
 
mrs.mcneal08-09 said...
Oct. 28, 2008 at 4:52 pm
that was very nice and funny!!!!!!!
 
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